Wednesday, 16 November 2016

Hui Time.

Today room 4 were one of the classes to host the school hui. The children all went on stage and read aloud their favourite sentence from their most recent piece of writing.

They all did well to speak into a microphone in front of a very big audience, including some very interested Mum's and Dad's!



I looked in the window for my Mum and Dad but they were lying motionless on the ground - Patrick.

I shut my eyes and took a deep breath - Olivia.

But Fiza was flat faced on the ground with a knife in her back - Suniya.

When the door creaked shut behind me - Gabi.

Jay could hear a rattling of bones behind him, the chase was on - Ted.

I was walking with my friends and I saw a house. I was frozen in fear. We didn’t dare to take a step - Roman.

I was walking home when someone came running towards me - Oliver.

I looked at the house and gulped - Maggie E.

I got scared. I went to my Mum’s room. She was dead - Poppy.

I shivered as a black cat scattered by - Codie.

Then I opened the door. Something leapt at me and I looked behind me. The door shut - Caitlin.

I slowly walked closer. Yum, a giant ice-cream, that is alive. OMG - Piper.

I ran screaming even though no one could hear my desperate screams for mercy - Rose.

My hair was standing on end. I was shivering like mad. And then when I thought it couldn’t get any worse, I heard an ear splitting crash - Daniel.

Then I opened the door in a spooky house, something made me fall down - Kaden.

They started running towards me - Nakul.

Grandma was gone. “Grandma Grandma” I called. The house was empty like a murderers place - Serena.

They looked strange in the night - Samhita.

The trees are making spooky noises pushing together - Maggie H.

I opened the door. It was dark and smelled like stinky perfume - Kirsten.

She banged the frying pan on Ava. “Oh sorry,” said Mimella. “I thought you were a tiger.” - Aarushi

I went to Mum and Dad’s room. A bat flew by. I ran. Mum was screaming nervously. - Jacob.

I looked in the window. There stood a man. He turned to face me and slowly turned into a werewolf - Michael.

I killed the zombie and I knocked down the old door and ran as fast I could until anyone came. It was like a museum of sharks - Saurish.

I saw a door in the distance. I started running towards it but it was getting further away. - Jayden

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